假设你今天上午和朋友一起参观了一座现代化高中,该校示意图和你们的参观路线(图中的箭头所示)如下: 请你写一篇日记,记述你们的参观过程。 注意:词数100词左右。

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问题 假设你今天上午和朋友一起参观了一座现代化高中,该校示意图和你们的参观路线(图中的箭头所示)如下:

    请你写一篇日记,记述你们的参观过程。
    注意:词数100词左右。

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答案Clear, Tuesday, October 11 th, 2006 This morning I had a visit to a model high school with my friend together. We entered the school at 9:00 a.m. through the school gate. Then we began our visit from the main building. It’s very big with a beautiful fountain in front of it. After that we went to the lab building where some students were doing experiments. Then we entered the lecture hall behind the lab building and saw many students who were listening to a lecture given by a foreign scholar. Beside the lecture hall in the left was the art center. We watched groups of students drawing there. And then we visited the large teaching building behind the art center and the lecture hall where students were having classes. Finally we arrived at the playground at the back of the school. Some boys were having a football game, which was so exciting that we spent a long time watching them. It was really an interesting visit.

解析 (i) 对干图表作文,应当严格按照图表信息的先后顺序来进行说明和描述,条理必须清楚。
(ii) 图表在在列举和交代信息时一般格式很统一,考生在进行说明和描述时应注意句式的适当变化,避免千篇一律。
(iii) 除了要点,可以根据合理想像添加一些图表中未涉及的信息,但不能多。
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