Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should 1) describe the diagram, and 2) give your comments.

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问题     Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should
    1)  describe the diagram, and
    2)  give your comments.
    You should write about 150 words.
   

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答案 The pie chart shows the time senior high school students spend online. It can be seen that a large amount of the time (as much as 61%) is spent on online games and chatting. 12% of the time is spent in searching or browsing through information and only 8% is for studying purpose. The remaining 19% is for other purposes which have not been explicated. The survey results tend to make readers worried. There is nothing wrong to use online resources to relax after a long day of study, however, a disproportionately huge amount of time is spent on online games and chatting, to the point that one might suspect of addiction. Many students now are deskbound and obsessed with the virtual world, oblivious to the equally amazing things and activities that are unfolded in reality. This is detrimental to the development of their personality and interpersonal skills. In my view, parents and teachers should step in, by setting a maximum amount of time for online games and chatting.

解析 该图表显示了高中生上网各活动所花的时间占比。从图表可见,高中生的大部分上网时间都用于游戏聊天。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:第一段描述图表。第二段提出个人看法:学生利用太多的上网时间来玩游戏及聊天,不利于学生的性格和人际能力的发展。第三段提出建议:家长和教师应该适时干预。
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