Read the text below. Write an essay in about 120 words, in which you should summarize the key points of the text and make commen

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问题    Read the text below. Write an essay in about 120 words, in which you should summarize the key points of the text and make comments on them. Try to use your own words.
   A 23-year-old Chinese woman has died after her mobile phone exploded while it was being charged.
   Miss Zhao was found dead in Shijiazhuang, the capital city of northeast China’ s Hebei province. She was talking to her boyfriend on her mobile phone, but suddenly went silent.
   After the boyfriend failed to get a response in a prolonged period of time, he rushed to Zhao’ s home. It was already too late, as the phone had clearly exploded in her hands, and her entire chest had been burned.
   This piece of news draws public attention to the using safety of electronic devices, especially the most commonly used mobile phone, and provides information that will be of great value in assessing the safety of cell phone use.
   Liang Guangchuan, a researcher from Hebei University of Technology, says the tragedy could be caused by a faulty charger and electric leakage of the lithium battery. He suggests that to be on the safe side, one should avoid using his or her mobile phone while it is being charged.
   This accident caused great response in the population of cell phone users. A cell phone user replied in an interview, " I swear, after I post this comment, I will never play with my mobile phone a-gain when the battery is still being charged. " A sample of comments on Weibo: " Should the cell phone producer be responsible for this accident and make effort to broadcast the knowledge of cell phone using safety?"

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答案 Recently, a tragedy happened in Hebei, China. A young girl died because of cell phone explosion. Her cell phone exploded when she was talking to her boyfriend at night via cell phone, which is being charged. This sad news caused public discussion all over country. Experts and researchers claimed that cell phone users should avoid of using cell phone when charging them in case of security issues. Those people who frequently use cell phones are concerned about the safety of cell phone using. Most users are frightened by this news and promised that they would never use cell phones when it was being charged. Yet, someone intended to question the liability of the phone producers and want to get safety assurance from them. In my opinion, as many cautionary tales as I have heard, I will try to get rid of the cell phone addiction and find other things to do when it is being charged.

解析    这是一篇总结加评论式文章。这篇文章主要讲了河北省的一位年轻女性因为在充电时使用手机致使手机爆炸而不幸死亡,从而引发了大众对手机在充电时的使用安全问题的讨论。该文章的中心思想应围绕“手机使用安全”这个问题展开。
   在写作时,考生首先要根据题目的要求总结所给文章材料的大意,总结时要简明扼要,抓住关键的中心思想;然后,将自己从所给材料中获得的启发或者是对材料的评论作为这篇作文的主体来写,比如摆脱对手机的依赖,在充电时不要玩手机等做法,从而避免类似的悲剧事件再次发生。最后,考生还要对自己的观点进行简要总结。此外,还要注意语言的连贯和衔接。
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