For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled The Importance of Companions by commenting on the saying, "

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled The Importance of Companions by commenting on the saying, " If you live with a lame person you will learn to limp. " You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案 The Importance of Companions There’s an old English proverb that "If you live with a lame person you will learn to limp. " It signifies that one can be easily influenced by his companions. In this sense, the importance of the companion is clearly evident. On the one hand, good company can be very conducive to our personal development. For example, if most of our roommates are hard-working students, we are more likely to follow suit and try to become outstanding too. If our friends are optimistic and joyful, we will soon be influenced by their attitudes and become more cheerful and upbeat. On the other hand, bad company has the power to devastate our life. For example, we could become heavy smokers or gamblers if people nearby like to smoke or gamble; we could turn out to be good-for-nothing people if we grow up in an environment where no one earns a living. In a word, we are what our company is, so we must be careful when choosing the companion.

解析     这是一篇议论文,主要讨论近朱者赤,近墨者黑的问题。
    第一段阐述环境对人的影响很大,好的朋友圈子很重要。
    第二段对引言进行评论,从正反两个方面论证了好的朋友圈子对人的积极作用和不好的朋友圈子对人的消极作用。好的朋友帮助我们提高自己。如果我们的舍友都是爱学习的好学生,我们更容易向他们看齐,变得出色。如果我们的朋友是积极乐观的人,我们就容易受他们积极态度的影响变得乐观向上。不好的朋友圈子影响我们的生活。如果我们周围充斥着香烟和赌博,我们也极易成为烟枪和赌鬼。如果我们周围的人不自食其力,我们也可能会变成无用的人。
    第三段总结全文,选择朋友要谨慎。
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