A. Title: THE "PROJECT HOPE" B. Time limit; 40 minutes C. Word limit; 120-150 words (not including the given opening sen

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问题     A. Title: THE "PROJECT HOPE"
    B. Time limit; 40 minutes
    C. Word limit; 120-150 words (not including the given opening sentence)
    D. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: " Education plays a very important role in the modernization of our country. "
    E. Your composition must be written neatly on the ANSWER SHEET 2. ( 15 points)
    Outline:
    1. Present situation
    2. Necessity of the project
    3. My suggestion

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答案 Education plays a very important role in the modernization of our country. However, not all children of school age in China have equal access to education due to the regionally imbalanced economic development. In some areas, especially remote and impoverished ones, a large number of children cannot afford to go to school. To change this situation, the "Project Hope" is established to provide a hard-won education opportunity for these children. Undoubtedly, the " Project Hope" is of great significance and plays a vital role in their whole life. Though it is in the law that all citizens shall enjoy equal opportunities for education, China’s current development has failed to assure that it is implemented. Therefore, the "Project Hope", sponsored by the CYDF (China Youth Development Foundation) , supports young dropouts in poverty-stricken areas with the funds raised from charitable enterprises and individuals, which is a win-win education strategy. The more children get well educated, the more contributions will be made for the country, thus the more prosperous China will be, in return, the more education opportunities government will provide. Nevertheless, people from all walks of life should do what they can to help those who are deprived of education due to poverty, whatever materially or financially. In addition, more attention shall be attached to the education system in rural areas by not only the government but also competent institutions.

解析     本文要求以“希望工程”为题写一篇作文,文章的提纲已经给出:1.(教育)现状;2.“希望工程”的必要性;3.个人建议。文章的首句“Education plays a very important role in the modernization of our country.”已经给出,结合提纲第一点,可以得出结论:首段应描述我国的教育现状。
    第一段:描述现状,引出主题。首句阐述了教育的重要性,紧接着可利用转折性的连接词,阐明受教育机会不平等这一现状,进而特别指出贫困山区孩子失学问题。末句可结合主题,表明希望工程成立的目的就是改变这一教育现状。
    第二段:现状所需,利国利民。二段叙述希望工程的必要性,注意要与首段中希望工程的目的区分开。考生可先从教育不平等这一现状人手,从宏观角度阐明希望工程的作用;再进一步分析希望工程发挥的作用——学生受助后能更好地回馈国家和社会,形成良性循环。
    第三段:提出建议,召唤希望。前文已经详细分析过希望工程的重要性和必要性,此段不必再对此进行阐述。考生可从呼吁社会投入更多关注、国家注重农村教育等角度入手,呼吁更多人行动起来。
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