6月1日是个星期天,天气晴朗,赵亮和李红一起去参观首都动物园(Capital Zoo),请以赵亮的口气写一篇日记,内容要点如下: 1.距离:离家约4公里 2.交通工具:坐公共汽车 3.时间:9点出发,15分钟后到达 4.动物:象、熊

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问题    6月1日是个星期天,天气晴朗,赵亮和李红一起去参观首都动物园(Capital Zoo),请以赵亮的口气写一篇日记,内容要点如下:
   1.距离:离家约4公里
   2.交通工具:坐公共汽车
   3.时间:9点出发,15分钟后到达
   4.动物:象、熊、狮、猴、鸟等,对猴略作描述。
   注意:词数80~100。

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答案 June l  Sunday                                 Fine Today is Sunday.After breakfast,I decided to visit the Capital Zoo with Li Hong.The zoo is four kilometres away from our home.We went there by bus.We started at nine.Fifteen minutes later,we got to the zoo.There were many animals in it,such as elephants,bears,lions,monkeys, birds and so on.We especially liked monkeys.We stayed near the monkeys mountain for almost half an hour.I threw some bananas to the monkeys.They seemed very happy and jumped from one stone to another.At noon we got back home.What a happy and interesting day we have spent!

解析    日记常用第一人称来叙述,叙述中,可以写一天当中发生的事情,以时间发展的先后次序来进行;或者是记述一件给自己印象深刻的事情。写作时结构要完整,注意格式。左上角写日期,几月几日在前,星期在后,右上角写天气情况。
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