For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a

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问题    For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and give your comments. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
   

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答案 Helping Others in Need (1)As is described in the picture, a little girl is helping the farmer push the wagon which is full of grain. Obviously, this picture tells us the importance of helping others. (2)Firstly, helping others in need has always been a virtue in our traditional Chinese culture, which should be inherited by our young people. Only if you immediately help others who get into trouble, you can get help from others.(3)In addition, helping others is the foundation of building a good interpersonal relationship, which is significant for building a harmonious society.(4)What is more, people in trouble need more help than the ordinary people. Maybe just a thread of light will call forth their strength and courage to get out of their difficulties. (5)To sum up, we should offer our help to all who are in need. I believe then the relationship between people will be more harmonious and our society will be a better place to live in.

解析 第一段对图片进行简要的描述,即从图中你能看到什么。
第二段阐释“乐于助人”的意义和重要性。
第三段总结主题,呼吁人们帮助需要帮助的人。
(1)该句是图画作文的常见句型,用来引出图画内容。
(2)(3)(4)层次分明地阐述了乐于助人的重要性,进一步支撑了主题句。
(5)该句型中的To sum up通常用于最后下结论,做出总结,呼吁人们帮助需要帮助的人。
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