For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled My View on Off-campus Room Renting. You should write a

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled My View on Off-campus Room Renting. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
    1. 很多大学生在校外租房住;
    2. 学生校外租房的主要原因;
    3.校外租房的利弊。
                       My View on Off-campus Room Renting

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答案 My View on Off-campus Room Renting Nowadays, an increasing number of college students choose to rent rooms or apartments off campus instead of living in dormitories on campus. There are probably three reasons for the popularity of room renting. Firstly, it seems the best solution for students who cannot adjust to dormitory life and show incompetence in roommate relations. Secondly, many a senior lives outside to make better preparations for the thesis or examination.Finally, room renting means freedom to some students. who hate to be regulated by the school rules. It’s obvious that living off campus provides some convenience, more favorable conditions. for example. However, the disadvantages far outweigh the advantages in this case. Room renting is money consuming for students.And escape is never the correct way out of maladjustment. Besides, too much freedom may result in indulgence and idleness. Therefore, we must think twice when considering living off campus.

解析     这篇作文讨论大学生校外租房这一热点问题。在布局上,根据题目中给出的三段式提纲展开即可。
    第一段指出很多大学生不住宿舍,而是到校外租房租房;
    第二段采用总分结构,从三个方面说明租房的主要原因,在论述当中注意使用一些结构词以使文章条理清晰;
    第三段简要说明校外租房的利弊,得出白已的观点,是利大于弊,还是弊大于利。
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