In this part, you are to write within 30 minutes a composition of no less than 150 words under the title of "My Favorite Way of

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问题     In this part, you are to write within 30 minutes a composition of no less than 150 words under the title of "My Favorite Way of Keeping Fit" . Some clues are given below in Chinese. Please write your composition clearly on the COMPOSITION SHEET.
保持健康有多种做法……,我最喜欢的做法是……

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答案 My Favorite way of Keeping Fit Nowadays, there are many books about keeping fit, which usually makes us puzzled. Even worse, we don’t recognize which methods are better for us. In my opinion, different people should choose different ways of keeping fits, according to their own conditions. My favorite way of keeping fit is to do physical exercise, such as playing tennis, swimming, jogging etc. First of all, and the most important, doing physical exercise usually makes me feel very energetic. So I can finish my work quite satisfactorily. Besides, unlike taking medicine or dieting, keeping fit through doing physical exercise has no side effects. However, some of girls diet to keep fit. They try to eat very little or do not eat a lot of things. This makes them feel very dizzy. They become very weak. Some of girls who take medicine to keep fit. This makes them feel sick sometimes. I think it’ s too harmful to our body. Therefore, my favorite way of keeping fit is to do physical exercise regularly. And I advise most of people to do more exercise which is beneficial to body building, as well as enriches our lives.

解析     写作文时,最重要的是明确自己要表达的内容。首先阐述基本情况,然后说明自己的观点,并做出解释,最后给出建议。文中第一段简要描述了目前的情况,并表明自己的观点,第二段对自己的观点做出分析,第三段反面举例说明自己观点的正确性,第四段再次强调自己的观点,并给出合理建议。
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