For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Trading on Campus. You should write at least 150 words

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Trading on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
    1.许多大学校园中出现了交易市场
    2.对于校园交易,有人表示赞成,也有人表示反对
    3.我的看法

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答案 Trading on Campus Today, it is widely acknowledged that college students should be all-round ones to adapt to the social development. Therefore, trading appears on campus as a way of social practice, which has attracted more and more students to be engaged in. However, as for this phenomenon, opinions vary from person to person. Some people insist that social practice plays an important role in college life, and students should learn something else besides textbooks. Student sellers can accumulate some useful experience in life, while buyers can take advantage of the opportunities. However, many other people do not agree. They say that the main task of students is to study, and campus trading may distract them. There appear some students who make so many efforts to make profits that they even stop attending classes. From my perspective, it is not sensible to overly worry about trading on campus. On the one hand, people always blame college students for being bookworms, but on the other hand, they are against practice which could help students gain experience. What’s more, college students are mature enough to keep a balance between study and social practice.

解析     第一段指出一种校园现象,即大学校园中出现了交易市场,并提到不同的人对这一现象有不同的看法。
    第二段从两个角度分析了校园交易现象,指出两种不同人群所持有的支持与担忧的态度。末句There appear some students...even stop attending classes是倒装句式,表示“出现了……的现象或结果”。
    第三段阐述了自己的观点,指出不必过分担忧这种现象,大学生已经足够成熟,知道如何在学业和社会实践之间保持平衡。
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