On Dieting In order to keep a slim figure, young people, especially young ladies go in for dieting. Sadly, they usually do i

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问题     On Dieting
    In order to keep a slim figure, young people, especially young ladies go in for dieting. Sadly, they usually do it in an unhealthy way. What is your opinion about dieting? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    On Dieting
    You are to write in three parts.
    In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
    In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.
    In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

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答案 On Dieting It always baffles me why girls would go on extreme diets to keep slim. They only feed on a morsel of cheese when they are about to faint and except for that, they refuse to take in any food. Excessive dieting, according to my opinion, is not encouraged, while healthy dieting should be advocated. On the one hand, excessive dieting is harmful to our health. When we consume less food than the body requires, we will end up with being under-nutritious, which in turn leads to malfunction of the body. Dizziness, depression and stomach problems are experienced by those who stick to "one cheese bite a day". If teenagers adopt this dieting method, it might impair their growth and mess up the metabolism. The consequences are dire and hard to be reversed. On the other hand, dieting in a healthy way should be encouraged. Many people are suffering from obesity and lots of health problems related to their weights. If they go on a healthy dieting and watch their intake of calorie, they will cut down the weight and the medical bills. In conclusion, dieting is a blessing for obese people but a curse for already slim ladies. We should decide whether to go on a diet based on our own body condition.

解析     本题属于“自由发挥型”作文,涉及的题材是“健康生活”。该题要求考生对“节食”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求,可谋篇布局如下:
    开头:从女孩子节食入题,指出过度节食不该提倡,我们应倡导健康节食。
    主体:阐述原因。
    1.过度节食有害健康,会导致营养不良。
    2.健康节食应提倡。对于患上肥胖症的人来说,应该节食。
    结尾:我们应该基于自身的身体状况决定是否节食。
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