For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write about How to improve our health. You should write at least 120 words followin

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write about How to improve our health. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 健康问题越来越受重视
2. 改善健康的方法

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答案 With the improvement of the living standard(l), people today have seen the importance of good health. It is clear to everyone that without a good health, one can hardly achieve what is desired or enjoy what is achieved(2). But how to improve our health? This is a question we must consider before doing anything. First, we should keep a good mood. Anger and negative moods darken our day and harm our health, so we should try to keep happy by showing tolerance (3) when the irritating moments come. Second, we should have a balanced diet(4) so that we have a reasonable intake of nutrition, which lays a solid foundation for good health(5). Third, remember to exercise. In fact, exercising doesn’t have to take place in the expansive gym. Jogging, swimming, and walking are all good ways to help us keep fit. Here, what we need to keep in mind is try to find ways suitable to us and then stick to them on a regular basis(6). In a word, pursing a good heath means choosing a right way of life for ourselves. It is all up to each of us to obtain it and maintain it(7).

解析     本文的写作难点在于提出改善健康的做法。考生应选择平时记忆的表达方式进行写作,以避免出现过多错误。另外,写作完成后检查时态、标点、拼写等有利提高作文的质量。
    1.the living standard意为“生活水平”,也可用“the standard of living”来表达,但不用the living level。
    2.one can hardly achieve what is desired or enjoy what is achieved意为“没有健康的身体”,人们很难达到自己的日标或者享受取得的成绩。
    3.tolerance意为“宽容”。
    4.a balanced diet指“饮食均衡”。
    5.lay a solid foundation for sth.意为“为……打下坚实的基础”。
    6.stick to意为“坚持(原则)等”;on a regular basis意为“有规律地”。
    7.Be up to sb.意为“由某人负责”,该句意为“获得健康并且保持健康全在于我们自己(的努力)”。
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