It has been more than six months since we had the opportunity to service your ear,and we’ve missed you.So,we are inviting you br

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问题 It has been more than six months since we had the opportunity to service your ear,and we’ve missed you.So,we are inviting you bring your car into our shop for a free inspection and adjustment. We hope that you will accept our offer.We have set aside the hours between 8:00 A.M.and 1:00 P.M.,Monday through Friday for your convenience.

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答案自从上次有幸给您检修汽车以来,已有半年多了,我们一直在惦记着您。所以邀请您开车来我车行进行免费的检修和调试。希望您能接受我们提供的服务。如果您方便的话,周一至周五上午8:00至下午1:00随时欢迎光顾。

解析 ①这是一封给客户的邀请信,翻译时应注意语言简洁、礼貌、得体。在翻译过程中尽量避免按原文结构进行直译,要对译文进行处理,使其符合汉语的行文习惯。②关于第1句中的since引导的时间状语从句的翻译,英语状语从句用在主句后面的较多,而汉语的状语从句用在主句前的较多,因此,在许多情况下,应将状语从句放在主句前面。had the opportunity可译作“有幸”,service跟car搭配可译作“检修汽车”;miss不宜直译为“怀念,想念”,应意译为“惦记”比较得体;而本文中的you也应礼貌地译为“您”而不是“你”。③第2、3句中的主语we因为与上句we’ve missed you相同可以省去不译。bring your car不宜直译为“带来您的车”,应意译为“开车”。a free inspection and adjustment可译作“免费的检修和调试”。offer(提供,提议),在此可意译为“提供的服务”。④第4句末的状语for your convenience在翻译时按照汉语的行文习惯也要放到前面,译为“如果您方便的话”。set aside the hours(留出时间),在此意译为“随时欢迎光顾”。
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