It is reported that a couple registered for marriage since they have chatted on Wechat for only one month. Is online romance rea

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问题     It is reported that a couple registered for marriage since they have chatted on Wechat for only one month. Is online romance really reliable? The following are the supporters’ and opponents’ opinions. Read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should first summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and give your view on the issue.
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YES
    Online love is very romantic and exciting. How does he/she look like? What is his/her view on Pride and Prejudice? It is the mysteriousness that pushes two strangers from afar to know more about each other.
    In China, one of the preconditions for couples to get married is that the groom must own a house. Unfortunately, many lovers break up for lack of material affluence. Online romance, compared with realistic love, attaches more emphasis on the appeal to each other in spirit and involves less material conditions.
    Online romance knows no boundary. Boys and girls can chat with each other once they find they have the same topics, regardless of their physical appearance and geographical limit.
NO
    The Internet is a virtual world, in which there impossibly exists real, enduring love since it is very difficult to tell the real from the fake on the Internet. Everything provided online may be proved untrue.
    Pursuing online romance is sometimes very dangerous because there are many cheaters on the Net. They disguise themselves as perfect lovers, rich, generous and gentle. They know what you want as a soft woman. But all of these are, in fact, tricks they play to cheat money or sex.
    Online love grows out of illusion and thus is very infirm. Sometimes, they even don’t have an overall understanding of the person they dream about. Yet they know each other better, they break up as quickly as they fall in love.

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答案 Online Romance Is not Reliable As ways of communications have diversified for decades, online romance has become increasingly popular among youngsters. Some in favor of it hold online romance, beyond physical attractiveness and geographical limit, is interesting and less emphasizes material conditions. Some are against it for the personal information provided online may be totally made up, the person you truly love a potential cheater and the love you think endures last and forever proves to be so fragile. As far as I am concerned, it is irrational to find a life companion online. To start with, love is defined as a strong emotional attachment to the person who shares the same habits and ideals. Such an attachment can’t be established overnight In most cases, online romance grows out of illusion and is likely to be augmented by halo effect, in which couples think the person they love is the best, despite all the weak points. Once the platonic love is tested in daily life, strengths vanish and weaknesses appear at a moment The story isn’t over yet; it just begins. Couples have to overcome realistic barriers if they want to carry their relationships much longer, for example, long distance, different family background and even different education background. To sum up, it is unwise to find a life companion on the Net, for online romance can be hardly true love and difficult to maintain.

解析     考生在下笔之前应先审题,明确写作要求:针对“一对情侣在微信上仅认识了一个月就注册结婚”这一热点,探讨网恋是否靠谱。首先考生应总结正反方观点,然后给出考生个人观点。文章结构可安排如下:   
    第一段:简要概括正反方观点,并表明自己的观点:在网上找生活伴侣不是理智之举。
    第二段:首先对爱的定义开始立论:爱情是两个人拥有同样的喜好和理想,对对方有强烈的情感依恋,而在短时间建立起来的网恋关系很容易“见光死”。就算最后他们的恋爱关系能够走得更远,网恋中的人们也得克服许多现实的障碍。
    第三段:重申观点——真爱很少会出现在网上,网恋也很难维系,因此在网上找生活伴侣不是明智之举。
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