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  3. Read carefully the following excerpt on bullies on campuses and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you

Read carefully the following excerpt on bullies on campuses and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you

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问题     Read carefully the following excerpt on bullies on campuses and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should;
    . summarize the main message of the excerpt, and then
    . comment on how to solve the problem of bullying on campuses. You can support yourself with information from the excerpt.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
                                Bullies on Campuses
    A 13-year-old boy from New York took his own life after being bullied by classmates at school.
    In teenager Daniel Fitzpatrick’s tragic suicide note, which was supplied by his parents, he claimed that his old friends at Holy Angels Catholic Academy bullied him repeatedly.
    "I gave up," Daniel, who was scheduled to start at Brooklyn’s Xaverian High School in the fall, wrote on lined paper.
    "The teachers either didn’t do anything!" he scrawled in the note.
    Daniel’s father posted a video to his Facebook page on Saturday to thank people for their support. In it, he condemns both the boys who "tormented" his son and the Catholic school that reportedly told him, "You’ll be fine. These things will pass. " when the teen went to school officials for help.
    "No parent should have to bury their child. No child should have to go through what my son went through. " the father said sorrowfully.
    The Brooklyn/Queens Diocese spokesperson told the New York Daily News: " In light of this tragedy we are reexamining all bullying prevention policies and training. The principal, teachers, and staff of Holy Angels Catholic Academy are heartbroken over the loss of Daniel Fitzpatrick. We take the issue of bullying very seriously and address every incident that is brought to our attention. "
    But more angry parents said that considering the short-term or long-term trauma bullying always causes, bullies in the school should take responsibilities in laws due to their infringement of others’ rights.
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答案 Fight Against Bullies on Campuses A boy’s tragic suicide reveals a tip of the iceberg of school bullying. Bullying on campuses is downplayed. More and more people urge that juridical responsibilities be imposed on bullies due to their infringement of others’ rights. Personally, I think when criticism and education fail to tackle this issue, legislation must be imposed. Bullying, defined as any deliberate act of intimidating or abuse in any form of another person, brings devastating trauma to its victims who often drop out of school or are emotionally shattered, or even turn to suicide. Be it from a violence-stricken growing environment, or the blind imitation of bloodthirsty TV programs, bullying, first of all, must be curbed by clear-cut anti-bullying policies. To put it into effect, schools must dedicate time to discussions and events related to this issue, such as showing films, presenting books, attending speeches and experiential seminars, to show their zero-tolerance attitude toward bullying. Moreover, intervention that helps students connect with groups on campus proves to be working in fighting against bullying. Schools provide so many diverse opportunities with which students may find a niche to fit in rather than stay isolated. Thirdly, in view of students’ unwillingness to call a spade a spade because they view the report of being bullied as creating a negative image of themselves, authorities can build up a website, a helpline, or a walk-in center where the victims’ anonymity is ensured. The last but the most important antidote to bullying is legislation, which will serve as a powerful deterrent for those tormentors. For those who still can’t hold back, they deserve to drink the bitter juice they brew. In conclusion, stricter measures should be taken to solve this thorny issue. Let us pray that one day in the near future we can all live in an environment free from bullying, harassment, discrimination and violence!
解析     本题讨论的是校园欺凌这一社会问题。选段中引用了一位在学校遭受欺凌而自杀的男孩的例子来说明校园欺凌问题的严重性。文中指出官方的发言人表态说要严肃处理类似事件，另外一些父母则提议通过立法来解决这一问题。本题的写作重点在于：首先概括上述选段的要点，其次就校园欺凌问题提出行之有效的解决措施。
    开头部分首先开宗明义，概述男孩自杀事件引出校园欺凌这个话题；然后概括为了解决这个问题人们所持的态度；最后表明自己的观点，即如果批评和教育不能解决问题的话。必须采取法律措施。
    中间部分首先定义欺凌行为。其次指出校园欺凌的严重后果，然后点明校园欺凌的根源，接着从四个方面指出解决这个问题的方法。在论述过程中，前三个方面的重点放在学校采取的措上，第四点也是最重要的一点指出作为威慑和惩罚，必须把欺凌者绳之以法。
    结尾部分首先总结：必须采取更严格的措施来对待校园欺凌问题。然后表达对没有任何欺凌或者歧视和暴力的未来的期待。
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