Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments.

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问题     Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should
    1)  interpret the chart, and
    2)  give your comments.
    You  should write about 150 words.
   

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答案 The bar chart shows the reasons why it is hard for a college graduate to find a job. The overwhelming majority of the employers (57.1%) say that it is because college students have no hands-on experience. It is followed by overreaching expectations of students (42.3%) and financial crisis (36.9%). The three least identified reasons are ineffective employment policies (8.8%), overly demanding requirements of employers (9.1%) and industries being at the lower end (13.8%). The remaining three reasons are sandwiched in the middle, namely, students not being hardworking enough (33.7%), a huge population of graduates (23.4%) and mismatched majors (19.2%). The results, more or less, objectively reflect the hard time graduates experienced over the past few years. Therefore, it’s high time students worked on their competitive edge—working experience during their college years. Work placements, internships, part-time jobs or even volunteering can help students improve their job prospect U-niversities, at the same time, are advised to systematically support their students, by offering career consultancy and a wealth of hands-on opportunities.

解析 该图表显示了用人单位认为大学生就业难的各种原因。从图表可见,较多用人单位认为大学生就业难主要由大学生自身因素造成。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:第一段描述图表。第二段提出个人看法:大学生应努力提高自己的实践能力,同时学校应给学生提供必要的支持。
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