Nowadays the telephone plays a very important role in our life. It makes our life more convenient. How- ever, it has its disadva

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问题    Nowadays the telephone plays a very important role in our life. It makes our life more convenient. How- ever, it has its disadvantages.
   You are to write an essay of approximately 400 words on both the positive and negative effects of the telephone on modem life. Support your ideas with reasons and examples.
   In the first part of your letter you should present your thesis statement, and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion with a summary.
   Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
Write your composition on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.

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答案 Since the telephone was invented, it has improved the quality of our lives in many ways and plays a very important role in modem life. We all know that the advantages the telephone brings to us are far more than its disadvantages. In other ways, however, it has had a negative effect on our lives. On the positive side, the telephone has been used as one of the most popular communication tools and widely applied in many fields such as doing business, communicating with people, providing more employment opportunities and dealing with emergencies. For example, the telephone has made doing business much easier and more efficient. It has made life easier for the consumer. People can pick up the phone to place or check on an order. The telephone has also made the world seem smaller. It allows us to talk with people all over the country and even all over the world. The telephone also helps you stay in touch with friends, and relatives, both near and far. In addition, the telephone has created many new industries and jobs. It has also saved countless lives in emergencies. On the negative side, the telephone can be a big time waster, both at work and at home. It often interrupts us and can even keep us from accomplishing our daily tasks. The telephone has also brought us plenty of unwanted calls. The telephone fewers people write personal letters. The telephone can also cause people to make fewer personal visits, since they can simply talk to people on the phone. From the above, we can see, then, the role that the telephone plays in our lives. It is widely used in our daily life. Even so, it has had both positive and negative effects on modem life.

解析   本文是一篇关于电话在现代生活中的作用的议论文,要求考生有理有据地阐述电话在现代生活中的正面及负面影响。虽然要从正、反两方面来谈,但作为一项新生事物,电话的正面影响应该多于负面影响。
   在范文中,共分四段来展开论述。第一段为引言,指出电话给我们的生活带来的巨大变化,继而提出自己的观点:它有很多优点,但也存在着缺点。第二段阐述电话肯定的一面,并用幻for example…in addition…恰当地引用实际生活中的例子(至少3个)来证明该论点,注意例子的逻辑性。第三段阐述电话否定的一面,引用一定的实际生活中的例子(少于优点的例子)来证明该论点,可用because of……since...等说明原因。第四段用“from the above,..”来引出结论,并重申作者的观点。
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