In some cities in China, people are no longer allowed to smoke in public places. Do you think this is a good rule or a bad rule?

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问题     In some cities in China, people are no longer allowed to smoke in public places. Do you think this is a good rule or a bad rule? Use specific reasons and details to support your position.
    Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic :
                     Should Smoking be Banned in Public Places?
    You are to write in three parts.
    In the first part , state clearly what your view is.
    In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.
    In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
    Marks will be awarded for content, organization , grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 Should Smoking be Banned in Public Places? The prohibition of smoking in public places is a very good rule. Not only will it improve people’s health, but also reduce conflicts. Banning smoking is of great help to our health. Smoking in public places can make people young and old, who are reluctantly involved, sick because these victims may be allergic to smoking. In that case, the non-smokers will be forced to quit talking, even quit their jobs if they are victims in office buildings. This is unfair! Therefore, non-smokers will be greatly pleased to ban smoking in public places and their health will be ultimately improved. Prohibiting people from smoking can also reduce interpersonal conflicts. Generally speaking, non-smokers are very inclined to get extremely annoyed when confronted with the heavy smokers; while smokers are frequently complaining about whether they should be entitled to smoking in public when faced with the disapproval on criticisms of non-smokers. The proper way is to weigh the impact of smoking in public places so as to diminish conflicts if people are thoughtful for each other, consequently, the relationship between people will be harmonious. To sum up, to ban smoking in public places is a priority. It will benefit smokers and non-smokers alike.

解析 公众场合禁止吸烟,这一话题很平常,考生都应有话可说。总体来讲,我们还是主张考生直接了当地提出自己的观点,然后采用两到三个论据来支撑主题句,最后简要总结。首先,提出自己的论点:禁止公众场合吸烟的制度好,不仅可以保护人们的健康,还能减少人与人之间的矛盾。然后,采用论据来支撑这一论点。可以采用逻辑推理,也可以举例说明,不能空洞,要言之有物。最后,简要重申自己的观点即可。
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