Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: The First Day of My University Life Mar

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问题    Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
   The First Day of My University Life
   Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 The First Day of My University Life My university life began in September 2003. Two years have passed since then but I can still remember some of the things on the first day of my university life. At 8 o’clock in the morning, I came to the campus together with my parents. To our surprise, we found the campus was already full of people. All seemed very happy. Father first noticed the flag of my department -- English School. We went up there, and with the help of the teachers, we quickly completed all the necessary formalities. Then we came to my dormitory. Mother was busy with my luggage, getting everything to their proper place, which allowed me the chance to chat with my roommates. Soon we became good friends. After lunch, we had a walk around the campus. It was very beautiful! My parents were greatly delighted and exhorted me again and again to work hard and make great achievement. Finally it was time for them to leave. Suddenly I felt extremely lonely and could not help sobbing. But I knew I had to adapt myself to the new condition, and the sooner, the better. So I turned to my new roommates who were as sorry as me. We talked until very late, and fell asleep with a lot of hopes for tomorrow. That was my first day of my university life. It seemed that nothing significant had happened. But in my memory, it would occupy a special place forever.

解析 这是一篇关于大学生涯第一天的记叙文。这一天的事情似乎很多,但想起来又不一定很重要,所以要写好文章,最好夹叙夹议,或一边叙事一边抒情。另外,大家最熟练的叙述方式无疑是按照时间顺序,也可以尝试使用倒叙和插叙。比如,可以先叙述这一天终于结束,然后再回头追忆发生的事情,这就是倒叙。还可以在叙事过程中,如办完手续到了宿舍后,可以插叙一段自己从前对宿舍的想象,与眼前的情景进行对比。这两种方法都会给人留下深刻的印象。
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