For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Filial Gratitude. You should write at least 120 wo

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Filial Gratitude. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below:
1.现在社会上有很多不孝敬父母的现象。
2.孝敬父母的必要性。
3.怎样做到孝敬父母。

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答案 Filial Gratitude (1) Nowadays, some people pay more attention to the accumulation of material wealth than anything else. As a result, they fail in filial gratitude for the sake of earning money. (2) Many elderly people thus suffer from the abuse and neglect of their children. It is urgent for us to address this phenomenon so as to guarantee the welfare of elderly people. (3) Undoubtedly, showing filial respect to our parents is a traditional (4) value and virtue of Chinese people. Ungrateful children are criticized and despised in their neighborhood, even losing their credit and reputation. Yet by taking care of our elderly parents we can set good examples so as to make our own children (5) follow suit. Furthermore, our government is setting up a system to protect the welfare of elderly people, although it is far from perfect at the moment. (6) As regards to how to show filial gratitude to our parents, we need to provide them not only with food and clothes, but also with care and consideration. (7) In my opinion, we should spare more time to accompany our aging parents so that they can enjoy the last stage of their life with love and with children around.

解析 (1)文章开头首先指出一些人忙于追求物质财富这一现象,较为自然地引出文章话题。
(2)指出这一现象的后果和解决问题的紧迫性。
(3)第二段分三个层面来论述孝敬父母的原因,分别由undoubtedly,yet,furthermore三个连接词来引导,文章条理清晰,意思连贯。
(4)使用了押头韵的词组value and virtue,使行文工整。
(5)指“跟着做,照着做”。
(6)该词组意为“关于,至于”,引出下文对孝敬父母的具体方法的探讨。
(7)最后给出自己的观点,指出我们的陪伴能使父母在晚年享受天伦之乐。
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