For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Big City Problems. You should write at least 150 words

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Big City Problems. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
    1.近年来越来越多的人涌人大城市
    2.出现这种现象的原因和后果
    3.为了改变这种状况,我认为……

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答案 Big City Problems Recent years have seen a sharp rise in the urban population in China. More and more people surge into big cities, including both college graduates and migrant workers. There are three main factors that account for such a phenomenon. First and foremost, urban residents generally enjoy better health, medical care and education than rural counterparts. Moreover, cities need more labor forces as the economy grows. Last hut not least, it is generally believed that there are more favorable opportunities in big cities. As a result, millions of people flood into cities in search of jobs and decent living conditions. However, it brings about a lot of problems, such as the shortage of suitable housing, the high pressure of transportation and environmental pollution in the city. In my view, effective measures should be taken to solve the problem. First, city development should be planned well. Second, the government should offer more benefits and convenience to the residents of towns and villages to encourage them to stay at home.

解析     第一段指出近年来越来越多的人涌入大城市,既有大学毕业生也有农民工。
    第二段主要论述出现这种现象的原因,首先是认为城市条件较好,其次是因为城市的发展也需要大量劳动力,再者是人们普遍认为大城市机遇多。然而这也引发了一系列问题,如住房紧缺、交通压力过大、环境污染严重等。
    第三段阐明解决这种现象的一些建议:政府合理规划城市发展以及为农民提供更多好处及便利条件使其在家中就业。本段中主动语态和被动语态交替使用,句型丰富。
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