For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled First-class Universities and First-class Students foll

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled First-class Universities and First-class Students following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
    1.有人认为只有学校先努力成为一流的大学,才能培养出一流的学生
    2.有人认为学生都努力成为一流的学生,学校才可能发展成一流的大学
    3.我的看法

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答案 First-class Universities and First-class Students Some people take it for granted that only the prestigious universities are able to develop students into talented people. In their opinion, a famous university usually possesses knowledgeable professors, advanced teaching facilities and convivial learning atmosphere. In addition , there will be chances to participate in some interesting and prospective projects within these prestigious universities. What’s more, many prestigious universities offer their students various internships in large companies, corporations and organizations. However, others maintain that only when all the undergraduates and graduates perform well can their university has the possibility to be world-famous. There is no doubt that students’ performances contribute a lot to the development of a university. A university full of A students will definitely be well-known. As far as I’m concerned, there is no necessary link between the fame of a university and the achievements of its students. For one thing, it seems clear that prestigious universities are unable to create "good students". If they could, then their admission policy would be to select high school graduates at random. For another, to become an A student requires both the student and the university’s efforts. And undoubtedly, students’ brilliant performances will greatly improve the reputation of their universities.

解析     第一段介绍有人认为只有学校先努力成为一流的大学才能培养出一流的学生,因为一流大学里师资优良、教学设备先进、学习氛围好,可提供多种公司的实习机会,这些都有助于培养一流的学生。
    第二段阐述了有些人认为只有学生都努力成为一流的学生,学校才可能发展成为一流的大学,若一个学校所有学生都表现优异,该学校将无可争议地成为一流大学。文中关于一流大学和一流学生用到first-class,prestigious,famous,well—known,A students,talented等,用词丰富。
    第三段阐述自己的观点,即一流大学和一流学生之间无任何必然联系。If they could,thentheir admission policy would be to select high school graduates at random.该句使用虚拟语气,为文章增色不少。
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