You are to write in no less than 120 words about the title "What Has the Progress of Science and Technology Brought about?". You

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问题 You are to write in no less than 120 words about the title "What Has the Progress of Science and Technology Brought about?". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
(1)科技的进步使我们的生活更加美好。
(2)科技的进步也给我们的生活带来了问题。
(3)你的看法。

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答案 Title: What Has the Progress of Science and Technology Brought about? There is no doubt that scientific and technological advances bring great benefits to people. Automobiles and airplanes enable us to travel a long distance in a short time; TV keeps us informed of the latest information, and enrich our lives; computers boost efficiency at the workplace. In a word, the progress of science and technology does make our life better. However, with the progress come some problems. Car exhaust pollute the air; TV exposes people to violence; computers encourage people’s dependence on machines and on many occasions, people were suffocated by the data-smog while looking for a bit of useful information. And even the plastic bags, designed to facilitate our lives, now become one of the major sources of "white pollution". In my opinion, each progress made in science and technology contributes to the improvement of man’s life. But unfortunately, the scientific discoveries and technological inventions are usually ill used to satisfy man’s irrational greediness. The point is we human beings should develop a positive attitude, exploring science and technology for us, but not against us.

解析     本文围绕科技进步带来的“好处和问题”这两个对立面展开论述,语言精准、内容连贯。这篇文章尤为突出的特点是选材的独到。作者选取我们日常生活中经常接触到的各种事物,如汽车、飞机、电视和电脑,从旅行、娱乐和工作三个视角来看科技进步给我们带来的好处和问题。因此文章内容具体而充实,论述令人信服。
    本文的写作风格给我们一个启示。有些作者在写作中忽略了自己的表达能力和文章篇幅的限制,想刻意表达深奥的思想,选材泛而抽象,结果文章内容空洞无物。因此,在写作中与其大而空,不如选择我们所熟知的事物,感受其深刻的方面,讲述平凡而深刻的道理。
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