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  3. Study the following table carefully and write an essay in which you should 1) describe the trend, and 2) give your comme

Study the following table carefully and write an essay in which you should 1) describe the trend, and 2) give your comme

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问题     Study the following table carefully and write an essay in which you should
    1) describe the trend, and
    2) give your comments.
    You should write 160-200 words neatly.
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答案 As is shown in the table, China’s elderly population is bound to expand significantly over the next 50 years. By the year 2050, the population will gradually approach its peak, with the percentage of the people ages beyond 60 making up 27.4 percent of the total. It is very likely that the expansion of China’s elderly population will not only bring job opportunities but also pose profound challenges for government and society inevitably. Of course, the change in social structures will create career opportunities in medicine and health professions, and in law and in business as well. Lawyers can specialize in "elder law", and businessmen will see huge opportunities in the elder market because more attention is being paid to the care and comforts of the elderly. Nevertheless, a host of problems brought on by aging population has been growing markedly apparent in our society. The care for senior citizens is badly needed, for their children, burdened with routine jobs in ever-escalating living pace, may have little time to attend to their comforts. Besides, aging can bring about a relative decline in working force in society and in turn fewer people must support the increasing aged population. Last but not the least, the aging of population in China that may partly result from the successful implementation of family planning has not been fortunately synchronized with the nation’s economic progress. Given all this, the aging of China’s population will call for the urgent adoption of drastic counter-measures. No doubt, family care and community services should be encouraged for the benefit of the elderly. The government should attach importance to overall social progress by modifying the backward situation in social security, welfare and service in anticipation of the expansion of elderly population.
解析     本文为涉及时间变化的图表作文命题形式。就人口老化的问题可以从多个角度展开，比如造成人口老化的原因、老年人口增加带来的商机、人口老化带来的社会问题等等。本文紧扣提纲，围绕命题要求展开。
    第一自然段简述了人口老化的趋势，作者采用了叙事的功能，以时间变化作为主要的发展线索。作者在第二自然段和第三自然段中使用了对比的逻辑，从利弊两个侧面进行了评述和分析。在最后一个自然段，作者针对上文分析的问题提出了解决的方案。
    整篇文章主要采用对比论证的方式。围绕着"人口老年化"、"机会和问题"、"扩大"、"社会"等关键词展开。综观全文，作者的分析表现出了主观的色彩。
    当然，在分析主题或评论时，也可以采用只谈人口老年化的益处，或只谈人口老年化的弊端。
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