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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Every year several languages die out. Some peo
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Every year several languages die out. Some peo
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2014-10-29
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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 4 score. Here is the examiner’s comment: This answer expresses a position on the topic, but the ideas are not always clear because of repetition and a lack of development (the answer is unfinished and underlength). The information is not organised coherently and it is difficult to follow a progression through the answer. Although some linking devices occur, substitution and referencing are not used, and connections between the ideas are unclear. The range of vocabulary is limited and repetitive, and inappropriate word choices, e.g. small country language; invest, make it difficult for the reader to follow the meaning. There are some attempts to produce complex sentences and some grammatical structures are produced accurately, but frequent errors and omissions in basic sentence formation and in punctuation make the writing difficult to understand. [*]
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