It is easier to win at chess if you are free, at your pleasure, to change the wholly arbitrary rules, but the fun is in winning

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问题 It is easier to win at chess if you are free, at your pleasure, to change the wholly arbitrary rules, but the fun is in winning within the rules.

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答案如果你不受规则约束、随心所欲地改变那些全然武断的游戏规则,你会更容易赢棋。然而,下棋的乐趣就在于遵守规则并取得胜利。

解析 以上两例,原文言简意赅,所以译文应该尽量使用简洁的书面语,但学生译文中“死得太早了”“很自由”“很高兴”这种表达却过于口语化,显得拖沓、松散,不符合议论文的语体要求。应当发挥出汉语四字成语的优势,使译文不仅切合原文文体,也切合汉语语言的大语境。
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