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  3. Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1. describe the drawing briefly,

Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1. describe the drawing briefly,

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问题     Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
    1. describe the drawing briefly,
    2. interpret its intended meaning, and then
    3. give your comments.
    You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
   
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答案 As is described in the picture, with his mouth sealed with tape, a kid fails to respond while his father is talking incessantly to him. Seemingly a little exaggerating, it goes without saying that the picture aims at revealing a current problem of the communication between parents and kids. An investigation of effective communication shows: kids may tune out when parents talk on and on; kids generally don’t respond positively when they feel like they’re being ordered around. Such actions bring about ineffective communication and conflicts between parents and children. The primary reason for this phenomenon is that the Chinese way of parenting is heavily affected by Confucianism with extreme respect for the elder. Hence, under the influence of traditional Chinese education concept, some parents favor authoritarian parenting strategies, not allowing their children’s independent voices or senses of self-efficacy. Consequently, children lose opportunities to express their own opinions, gradually getting used to doing what they are told to instead of thinking independently and critically. From the above analysis, we come to the conclusion that good communication is an important parenting skill, while the positive two-way communication is essential to fostering children’s ability of independent and creative thinking. Having empathy, respecting children’s feelings, allowing them to make choices, and setting fair and clear limits on unacceptable behaviors can form a healthy and balanced parent-child relationship that all parents should strive for.
解析     对于图片作文的审题，首先要掌握图片信息，根据“显性”信息推测“隐性”信息，再联系实际展开合理联想，最终确定立意。该图片画面简单，可分为左右两部分：左边是被胶带封住了嘴的孩子，而右边是正在滔滔不绝的父亲，这些即为本图的“显性”信息。作者运用夸张的手法，通过儿子被封住的嘴巴来表现其没有话语权，这即为图片的“隐性”信息。与现实生活相联系，图片影射的正是中国家长与孩子之间的沟通问题。在确定作文的立意时，“显性”与“隐性”信息缺一不可。
    第一段：描述图片，揭示寓意。先由左至右对比描述孩子与家长的动作或状态，接着揭示图片寓意。
    第二段：联系实际，充分延展。先借助调查或研究结果展现家长与孩子沟通的问题所在，进而分析造成该问题的主要原因及其可能造成的不利影响，层层推进。
    第三段：总结评论。先指出良好家庭沟通的重要性，继而呼吁家长和孩子进行积极的双向沟通，以建立健康的亲子关系。
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