For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a campus activity that has benefited you most. You should

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a campus activity that has benefited you most. You should state the reasons and write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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答案 The Most Beneficial Activity on Campus Every university offers numerous kinds of activities to enrich students’ extracurricular life. As one of the young college students, I have learnt a lot from all of these well-organized activities.But the one that has benefited me most is the debate competition I took part in last year. That was a debate competition between different majors and the topic was about theoretical knowledge versus practice.What matters most is not the result of the debate, but what I have learnt from it.That is, no individual could accomplish a challenging task all by herself or himself. Joint efforts are of great importance in winning any competition. It was really lucky for me to take part in the debate competition, from which I got the most precious gift for future: cherishing team spirit and joint efforts, which will help me sweep away every block falling in my way to success.

解析 一、指出大学校园中最让“我”受益的活动(benefited me most)
二、阐述该活动让“我”受益之处
1.描述活动(a debate competition)
2.活动所得 (what I have learnt from it)
三、升华主题,指出“我”从活动中得到了对未来而言最珍贵的礼物(the most precious gift for future)
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