Nowadays, food safety problems like melamine in baby formula milk powder have caused more and more concern all over the country.

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问题    Nowadays, food safety problems like melamine in baby formula milk powder have caused more and more concern all over the country. Though the Food Safety Law is improved, food safety problems still happen one after another. What do you think about it?
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   On Food Safety
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答案 On Food Safety Nowadays, the problem of food safety has aroused more and more concern all over the country. The Food Safety Law is fighting against all kinds of food safety problems, for instance, melamine in baby formula milk powder, Sudan Red in KFC, etc. In a word, food safety is facing unprecedented challenges. Food safety means that food shall be non-toxic, harmless and conform to proper nutritive requirements. It is a complex issue because of many reasons; the first and most important reason is that many industrial raw materials are directly used in food production. Take Sanlu milk powder for example. The producers use industrial material melamine to improve protein content in baby formula milk powder, which finally leads to infants’ kidney stone. Other reasons are the use of harmful chemical pesticides, and the use of cheap harmful materials instead of harmless materials in food production, etc. On account of the above analyses, it is vital to ensure food safety. The food safety management system should be perfected. The government should pay more attention to food safety problems. In addition, in the long run, healthy food or green food industry should be vigorously advocated so as to ensure food safety, and then people’s health.

解析    开头部分
   首段以举例的方式揭示我国食品安全的现状,如婴儿配方奶粉中含有的三聚氰胺、肯德基食品中的苏丹红等,进而提出自己的观点:食品安全正面临着前所未有的巨大挑战。
   中间部分
   在对威胁食品安全的因素展开分析之前,首先陈述了食品安全的概念,之后通过It is a complex issue because of many reasons…引出下文,指出威胁食品安全的因素主要包括将工业原料应用于食品生产,在食品生产过程中使用廉价、有毒的原材料等。
   结尾部分
   根据对威胁食品安全因素的分析,提出建议:食品安全管理体系需进一步健全;同时政府也应当着重关注食品安全问题,鼓励绿色、健康食品产业的发展。
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