For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communicat

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication. Your essay should start with a brief description of the picture. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
         The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication

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答案 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication (1) As is shown in the picture, the father asks his daughter how her school was today; (2) instead of answering him directly, the daughter tells her father to read her blog. This little story seems somewhat funny, (3) but it reflects a typical way of interpersonal communication in modern society, (2) that is, via the Internet. Obviously, the development of the Internet has made a great impact on interpersonal communication. (4) On the one hand, the Internet provides more convenient and interesting ways of communication, (S) including blogs, emails, instant messengers like QQ and MSN, (6) which are increasingly welcomed. (7) For example, (8) in many schools, teachers send and receive students’ homework by the Internet; (8) in many companies, colleagues communicate with each other by sending instant messages or holding video conferences. (4) On the other hand, the Internet brings some negative impacts on interpersonal communication. More people complain having lost face-to-face communicating skills. Some people even become indifferent to each other in real life. (9) From the above-mentioned, we can safely conclude that the Internet is (2) a double-edged sword for interpersonal communication. We should take full advantage of the convenience it brings, and (2) meanwhile avoid being immerged in it too much.

解析 (1)开门见山,描述图片内容
(2)亮点短语:“代替”、“即,也就是说”、“双刃剑”、“同时”
(3)转折指出图片反映的主题
(4)从正反两方面阐述影响。
(5)“包括”,充当ways的后置定语。举例说明,说服力强
(6)引导非限制性定语从句
(7)举例说明,说服力强
(8)分号连接两个并列分句,分别列举学校和公司的情况
(9)自然得出结论
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