For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "In order to be irreplaceable, one must alw

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "In order to be irreplaceable, one must always be different." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can be different and irreplaceable. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案 Coco Chanel, founder of the world famous French brand Chanel, remarked: "In order to be irreplaceable, one must always be different." The quote not only summarizes the secret of Chanel, but also reveals the jungle law of our society: it gains me competitive edge to be different. If you are different from others, you are hard to be replaced, because others don’t have special qualities as you do. However, if you don’t stand out, the situation is wholly different. China, for example, was known for its cheap labor, which made the products "Made in China" popular in the world. But now, China is being replaced by countries like Vietnam for their cheaper labor. After all, the Chinese model has nothing special and is easy to copy. On the contrary, the American design, for their distinction and originality, has nearly met no rivals yet. As for me, the most important thing to be different and irreplaceable is to dare to be myself. First, I will do what I like to do and what I’m good at. What’s more, I will keep learning skills to keep improving myself. And I will speak out and dare to present the opposite views.

解析     这是一篇基于名言评论的分析型作文。首先要求考生就“要想不可取代,必须总是与众不同”这句名言做出评论,并提出自己的观点进而加以例证阐述,然后就如果做到与众不同且不可替代谈谈自己的做法。根据题目要求,文章的结构可安排如下:
第一段:简单引述名言:要想不可取代,必须与众不同;
第二段:论证名言的说法,并举例说明;
第三段:讲述自己可以怎样做到与众不同和不可替代。
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