For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational Activities. You should write at least 12

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational Activities.  You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
    1.娱乐活动多种多样
    2.娱乐活动可以使人们受益,也可能带来危害
    3.作为大学生,我认为……

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答案 Recreational Activities In the era of information and technology, abundant recreational activities are available for people to release their strains and stresses. There is a heated debate over whether recreational activities are good for the public or not, especially for the college students. It is commonly accepted that recreation is helpful. For one thing, it can keep us healthy physically and mentally. For another, it goes without saying that various activities brought by modern technology have greatly enriched our experiences and brought much excitement to us. In contrast, others claim that these activities bring many problems. They point out that if people spend too much time on recreational activities such as sports and computer games, they might fail to concentrate on their studying and working, which may lead to further consequences. As for me, I hold the belief that recreational activities do more good than harm. They do give us a good chance to relax, and thereby, make us study and work more efficiently. It’s advisable to arrange the time reasonably and I’m sure we will benefit more from recreational activities.

解析     第一段点明娱乐活动的形式多种多样。
    第二段提出有人认为娱乐活动有益处的观点,原因有两点:娱乐活动使人们保持身心健康并丰富了人们的生活。本段末句套用了it goes without saying that句型,表示“不言而喻,理所当然”,使句式更加多样。
    第三段指出相反的观点:有些人认为娱乐活动会带来危害。原因是人们如果花费太多的时间进行娱乐,很有可能忽视自己的学习和工作。
    第四段提出自己的观点:娱乐活动利大于弊,人们应该合理安排娱乐时间。
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