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  3. - Your company plans to release a new kind of pocket battery and has chosen some customers for product-use test, you have been a

- Your company plans to release a new kind of pocket battery and has chosen some customers for product-use test, you have been a

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问题 - Your company plans to release a new kind of pocket battery and has chosen some customers for product-use test, you have been asked by your boss to write a report recommending the best ways to improve the product according to the feedbacks.
- Write a report to your boss:
- describing the feedbacks of customers
- outlining the advantages and disadvantages of the products
- suggesting your solutions.
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答案Report on ways to improve the products according to the feedbacks The purpose of this report is to recommend ways to improve the product according to the feedbacks of the chosen customers. All the figures and information are obtained from the feedback from customers. After a thorough analysis of the feedbacks from customers we chose for product-use test, I found the following problems about the products. First, the customers think the charger of the battery is too big and can’t be carried with everywhere, while the style of the battery doesn’t allow being charged with universal chargers. Second, some customers, especially some women customers, think the pattern of the battery is neither very pleasing nor attractive. Third, some customers think that the name of the battery is not very vivid and they don’t think it can attract many customers. We took serious considerations to the feedbacks and compared our product with that of the opponents and found some advantages and disadvantages of the product. Our battery lasts long and is easy to take along with, which attracts customers the most. What’s more, our battery can be used in different kinds of electric budgets and that adds more to the advantages. However, our product is not appealing in its design and name, and the charger is a little too big. As a result, I think that we should change the name and design two appearances for men and women differently. What’s more, the charger should be improved to be more suitable for trips.
解析     题目要求写一份报告。根据题目要求，这是一份写给老板的关于产品试用后用户反馈及如何改进的报告。要求首先说明客户的意见反馈；然后说明通过客户反馈及产品对比发现的产品的优缺点：最后提出自己的解决方案。写作时应注意前后照应．语意衔接自然连贯，同时应注意避免语法、拼写等错误。
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