Outside the Examination Venue Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describ

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问题     Outside the Examination Venue
    Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should
    1) describe the drawing briefly,
    2) explain its intended meaning, and
    3) give your comments.
   

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答案 In the picture, a place for college entrance exam is featured. Under the scorching sun, many parents are holding an umbrella, waiting eagerly outside the entrance. This picture implies that parents attach too much emphasis on college entrance exam, considering it as "the exam that can change a kid’s life". Despite the harsh weather, parents show their emotional support by standing outside the examination venue. In my view, parents are overestimating the role college entrance exam’ plays in their children’s life. Parents hold that success in the exam might mean a better chance of receiving better higher education, getting a better job offer and hence living a better life. Nevertheless, they need to realize that life is never that simple and deserves diversified interpretation. For instance, Bill Gates dropped out of college and started his own company. His courage, vision and determination are all the more important than a good grade in an exam. He would not be as successful as he is if he had stuck to the beaten path. In conclusion, parents should adopt an unbiased viewpoint on college entrance exam. It is important, of course, but not that important to equate it with life-and-death matter.

解析     这幅图片刻画了一群家长在高考的考场外顶着烈日等待孩子的情景。从家长的着急程度可以看出,高考被赋予了过大的期待。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,文章内容可安排如下:
    第一段简要描绘图片,并指出图片的意图:家长过于看重高考,认为高考是“能改变孩子一生的考试”。
    第二段提出个人看法:家长应该正确看待高考。高考的成功无疑能给孩子带来一定优势,但这并不意味着高考失败了就不能成功。以比尔?盖茨主动放弃大学教育为例,说明人生轨迹可以多样化,不必全部押注在高考上。
    第三段总结全文。
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