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Team purchasing is a new way to buy things on the Internet, which is becoming more and more popular among young people. How far
Team purchasing is a new way to buy things on the Internet, which is becoming more and more popular among young people. How far
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2015-07-27
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问题
Team purchasing is a new way to buy things on the Internet, which is becoming more and more popular among young people. How far do you agree with this kind of online shopping? You are to write a composition of about 400 words on the following topic:
On Team Purchasing
In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
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答案
On Team Purchasing In recent years, with the development of the Internet and online shopping, team purchasing (or group buying, group purchasing) is [1] gaining increasing popularity among people, especially the young. [2] Towards such a new phenomenon on the Internet, people’s attitudes vary greatly. Though many people do not agree to this kind of online shopping, [3] I maintain that team purchasing does the customers a lot of good. To begin with, team purchasing can improve efficiency. Nowadays, [4] in the face of various goods and services, many customers feel it difficult to make a choice. When people have to spend an extensive amount of time selecting commodities or services that fit their needs, it’s no doubt that the efficiency is reduced. However, team purchasing can help [5] cure the headache that customers experience in e-commerce, because most team purchasing activities offer discount on only one item every day. In this case, customers’ needs become more explicit. [6] To buy or not to buy? It’s a decision that can be quickly made. Therefore, if we say that online shopping has greatly enhanced people’s efficiency, team purchasing is driving such efficiency to a new level. In addition, group purchasing brings more [7] tangible benefits to customers. [8] On the one hand, compared with ordinary stores, supermarkets, online shopping, etc., team purchasing websites always provide goods and services at much lower prices, often 20% to 30% of their market price, [8] On the other hand, group purchasing ensures a relatively higher quality of various products, since most goods and services are well-known brands. Finally, team purchasing creates a platform of communication for the customers. In the past, although people were eager to find someone who shared the same shopping needs before they went shopping so that they could buy a good bargain, they lacked the terrace to get information and interact with others. However, with online team purchasing, the above problem can [9] be smoothly solved. As the benefits that team purchasing brings to the buyers are obvious, it is understandable that team purchasing enjoys a striking popularity among people. However, [10] it is still worth mentioning that team purchasing carries some risks. And one of them is that since there is a lack of related laws to regulate team purchasing, the phenomenon of fraud is not uncommon. Therefore, when people turn to group buying for lower prices, they should be cautious and choose some professional websites.
解析
[1]“在…中越来越受欢迎”。
[2]本句将介词结构提前,目的是为了强调,正常语序为:People’s attitudestowards…varygreatly.
[3]引出自己对网络团购的看法。
[4]“面对…”,选词恰当。
[5]“治疗这种头痛”,是一种暗喻的说法,将人们面对复杂繁多的商品不知如何选择的困境比喻成headache,形象、生动。
[6]此句让人联想到莎士比亚的名句:To beor not to be.
[7]“实惠”,选词地道。
[8]从两方面具体分析网络团购带来的实惠,使段落内部条理清楚,连贯自然。
[9]“迎刃而解”,选词地道。
[10]“值得一提的是…”,顺带提到网络团购的风险,使文章更有说服力。
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