For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Creating a Green Campus. You should write at least 12

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Creating a Green Campus.  You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
    1.建设绿色校园十分重要
    2.绿色校园不仅是指绿色的环境……
    3.为了建设绿色校园,我们应该……

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答案 Creating a Green Campus During recent years, the topic of a green campus has aroused public attention and become more and more popular. Undoubtedly, the significance of a green campus cannot be neglected. First, it is indispensable for the development of college students. Second, it also has a profound impact on both the individuals and the society. However, it should be mentioned that a green campus includes not only the places where the students live, but also the mental environment. Without green surroundings, the soul of students would not be as pure as we wish. Therefore, it is of high significance for us to take effective measures to create a green campus. In the first place, it is essential that laws and regulations should be introduced and strictly enforced. Furthermore, we should enhance the awareness of the students. Only in this way can we get a satisfactory result. And we believe that a green campus will be achieved in the near future.

解析     第一段提出建设绿色校园的问题,并从两方面指出其重要性:一方面,它在学生的发展过程中必不可少;另一方面,它对个人和社会产生深远影响。
    第二段先指出建设绿色校园不仅包括建设绿色的校园环境,还包括净化学生的心灵,然后分析二者关系。段末过渡句指出建设绿色校园非常重要。本段第一句是带有宾语从句的复合句,其中宾语从句中又套用了not only…but also…结构,是个亮点。
    第三段提出建设绿色校园的两个措施:一是制定并严格执行法律;二是增强学生的意识。本段第一句是带有主语从句的复合句,倒数第二句是一个起强调作用的倒装句,长短句结合,句式多变。
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