Nowadays, many young people are crazy about the TV talent shows. In order to realize their dreams of becoming famous stars, some

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问题     Nowadays, many young people are crazy about the TV talent shows. In order to realize their dreams of becoming famous stars, some of them even give up their study to attend these shows. This phenomenon has caused many parents’ and teachers’ concern. What is your opinion?
    Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    Should Students Attend the TV Talent Shows?

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答案 Should Students Attend the TV Talent Shows? No one can deny the fact that teenagers have been the main force in the hot TV talent shows recently. TV talent show is the platform on which ordinary duckling would become a super star. Some young candidates even give up their study to pursue their dreams. So many adults, especially teachers and parents, are concerned about it and suggest that students should be banned from attending the TV talent shows. To be frank, I cannot agree with them. In my opinion, students should be free to attend the TV talent shows. My arguments for this point are as follows. One of the primary reasons is that study is not the only way to realize one’s value. Life means a lot, but the most important is to develop one’s ability. If a young girl could become a good singer in the talent show, why should we bury her talent in books? What’s more, Bill Gates’ case has clearly told us the diploma wasn’t equal to ability, so quitting school is not the end of the world. As long as the young men know their goals, their elders should support their decisions and offer wise guidance if possible. Generally speaking, though being young and inexperienced, students are independent and free to choose their own paths. They can fulfill their dreams in a smoother way with the support of their parents and teachers.

解析     本题是一个对比选择型题目,即给出一个话题,有两种选择,要求考生选择其中一个观点论证说明。从题目来看,本题含有两种观点:学生可以参加电视选秀节目和学生不可以参加电视选秀节目。考生可从这两种相对的观点中选择一个自己较认同的,然后来论证自己的观点。进行论述时,可以从其反面观点人手,通过驳斥反面观点来得出自己支持的观点,自然成文,行文的关键在于论述要有力、清晰。显然,对于本题我们可以有两种写作思路:
    思路1:学生不应该参加选秀节目。
    选秀节目会耽误学生的学业,甚至会让某些一心想成为明星的学生放弃学业。所以为了不让孩子“误入歧途”,应禁止学生参加选秀节目。
    思路2:学生可以参加选秀节目。
    首先,年轻人可以自由选择自己的人生道路;其次,做学问并不是年轻人的唯一出路,生活可以是丰富多彩的;再者,放弃学业并不意味着失败,成功的道路可以有很多。
    范文选择了肯定的观点,先简单介绍思路1,然后对其进行否定,引出思路2的观点,对于学生参加选秀节目给予肯定。
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