Write an essay of 160~200 words based on the following drawings. In your essay, you should: 1) describe the pictures briefl

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问题 Write an essay of 160~200 words based on the following drawings. In your essay, you should:
    1) describe the pictures briefly,
    2) make both positive and negative comments, and then
    3) give your comments.
    You’ should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

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答案 Which is Better for Graduates — to Start Their Own Business or Get Employed? [1]As is shown in the picture, to [2] get a job from a company is no longer the only way for graduates to take,since the possibility of[3]starting their own businesses provides a wider range of choice. [4] Accordingly, whether it is good for students to begin an undertaking immediately after leaving school has caused enormous discussions, [5] Some hold that it would be better for students to work for others after they graduate, [5] while others think that establishing business of their own would benefit the graduates more. Those who maintain the former standpoint may argue that [2] getting employed has less risk. and thus creating a more stable environment for the graduates to develop. What’s more, they insist that students who have just left school are [6] so idealized and inexperienced [6] that if they [3] set up their own business they would probably gain nothing but failure. Those who hold the latter viewpoint base their theory primarily on the fact [7] that [3] running a business of one s own provides more opportunities although it is more challenging. They argue resolutely that [3] working for oneself has more freedom, which allows people to [8] tap their potential to the full. [9] Weighing up the matter in my mind, I think graduates should work in a company for some time to gain experience before starting up their own business. [10] After all, running a business is not an easy task and blindly following one’s dream is not a wise practice.

解析 本题两幅图反映的是“就业”与“创业”这一主题。第一幅图片暗指在过去,学生离开学校后只有“就业”这一条路可以选择;而第二幅图片则表明在现在,学生毕业后不仅可以选择去企业工作,还可以选择自己创业。这一变化引起了不少的争论,有的人认为“就业”对刚毕业的学生来说更好,而另一些人则认为自主创业会带来更大的发展。
    按照对比选择型作文的行文思路,本文可作如下布局:第一段首先描述图画,然后通过图画归纳出文章的主题并指出两种相对立的观点:有的人认为“就业”好,另一些人则认为“创业”更好;第二段阐释两种观点各自的原因;第三段表达自己对“就业好”还是“创业好”的看法。
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