For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Competition. You should write at least 120 words b

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Competition. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below:
1.竞争使人们充满创造力,使人们更有效率。
2.竞争促使生产出更好的产品和提供更优质的服务。
3.竞争促进了社会的进一步发展。

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答案 Competition (1) Competition makes people more creative and effective. It urges them to plan better, to try harder, and to achieve more. With a desire to excel in their work, people tend to perform more creatively and more efficiently. (2) Competition helps produce better products and provide better services. In the present world of intense competition, every manufacturer tries his best to outmatch his competitor by producing goods of better quality at lower costs. As a result, consumers pay less and receive better service. (3) Competition promotes further development of society. If there were no competition, people would remain complacent and be unwilling to make any efforts or risk anything new. However, with fierce competition going on, they exert themselves to accomplish more. Their accomplishment will, in one way or another, contribute to the progress of society.

解析 (1)采用经典的三段式写作方法展开,第一段呼应题目的第一个方面,即竞争使人们充满创造力,使人们更有效率。
(2)第二段呼应题目的第二个方面,即竞争促使生产出更好的产品和提供更优质的服务。
(3)第三段呼应题目的第三个方面,即竞争促进了社会的进一步发展。
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