Directions: For this part, you are allowed to write a short essay entitled College Students’ Making Money. You should write at l

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问题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed to write a short essay entitled College Students’ Making Money. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.
   1. 大学生兼职工作的现象
   2.大学生兼职工作的原因
   3.我的观点

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答案 College Students’ Making Money Nowadays, it is rather fashionable for college students to take part-time jobs. They work in theft spare time in restaurants, bars, or help children as a tutor. A few of them even set up their own company. There are several reasons for them to take part-time jobs. First, they think making money through their efforts can help them know the value of labor so that they can be more independent, more confident and more economically minded. In addition, making money off campus can help them get more social experience, realize what the society is really like, which is good for them to get a better job and grasp the communicating skills. In my opinion, to us students, studying hard is the most important task. If we have finished our lessons, we may take some part-time jobs. Thus, the more important thing is to keep the balance between study and work... If we can deal with it well, we can benefit a lot from it. (168words)

解析  [写作思路] 这篇作文属于夹叙夹议的类型,其特点是往往以一个社会问题或社会现象开头,中间部分分析原因、列举影响或危害,最后提出解决问题的建议或者展望未来。因此我们可以按照这种程序来展开文章。第一段指出目前高校学生兼职的现象很普及,可举在饭店、公司做兼职以及做家教办公司等例子加以说明。第二段阐述造成这种现象的原因:首先通过自己的努力挣些钱可以使学生们意识到劳动的价值,从而获得经济上的独立。其次,在社会上兼职也可以使学生更多地了解社会,为他们以后踏上社会做好准备。第三段结合自己谈我们应该怎么做:对于学生米讲,最重要的还是先把学习学好;同时,还要注意保持好二者的平衡。根据以上思路便可以形成以下的作文。
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