Write an essay of 160-200 works based on the following drawing. In you essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interp

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问题     Write an essay of 160-200 works based on the following drawing. In you essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it.
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答案 Failing to find the water, the worker, with a cigarette in his mouth and a sped in his hands, is leaving the holes he has dug. The five holes are of different depths, but none of deep enough to reach the water. When he dug the last hole a few inches into the earth he lost patience and concluded that there is no water where he has dug. Therefore, he decided to dig in another place. Actually, there’s a great deal of water beneath the holes. If he continues to dig a few inches more into the earth, he is sure to find the water. It was because he didn’t make unremitting efforts that he failed all. There are countless examples of the case mentioned above. A task, no matter how difficult it is, can be fulfilled provided that one holds to it with firmness, patience and perseverance. As the proverb says "with time and patience the leaf of the mulberry becomes satin", it is the patient toil and constant effort that brings about success.

解析     本题为一看图作文。这是一新兴的作文测试题,要求考生加强描述、推断、定义、下结论,综合概括等基本表达法的训练,步骤一般为描述图表说明含义及例证。该题反应的主题应是"只要坚持,再困难的事也能完成"。图中描述一位工人缺乏耐心和恒心这一主题。
    (1) It was because...failed all."正是由于…",用强调句道出了挖井工人失败的原因。
    (2) A task,no matter...perseverance,意为"不管工作有多难,只有我们有耐心,有毅力去坚持,最终都能完成工作"。该句使用让步状语从句和条件状语从句使我们从中得出启发。
    (3) with time and...satin用谚语"只要功夫深,铁杵磨成针"结束全文,是主题的升华。
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