Below is a cartoon about a couple’s talk over cable theft. Look at the cartoon and write an essay of about 120 words making refe

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问题    Below is a cartoon about a couple’s talk over cable theft. Look at the cartoon and write an essay of about 120 words making reference to the following points:
   1. describe the story;
   2. point out why the couple are wrong and what they should do.

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答案 The cartoon tells us a ridiculous story. In front of a house, a woman said to her man with electric wires around his shoulder, "next time don’t steal the electric wires in our neighborhood, or power failure will affect our son’s studies." Behind them in the house their boy is doing his homework in the dim candlelight. What selfish and stupid parents they are! They seem to care about their son, but how about the public interest? Even if the man follows his wife’s advice and steals the electric wires somewhere else, he is still disturbing other people’s everyday life and committing a crime. What’s more, they are setting a very bad example for their son indeed! So what they should do is to stop their wrong doing immediately instead of repeating it somewhere else.

解析    第一步:审题
   1.题型:看图作文
   2.文体:论述说明文
   第二步:框架分析
   1.说明漫画内容,点出要点;
   2.漫画中人物的不良行为以及他们所应该做的事情。
   第三步:列出写作思路
   1.在漫画中,女子让男子不要在她家附近偷电线,断电影响孩子学习;
   2.孩子由于断电不得不在屋子里点着蜡烛学习;
   3.评论漫画内容:很显然,这对夫妻很自私,只顾自己孩子,而不顾公共设施,况且盗窃本身就是违法行为;
   4.事实上,他们给孩子也树立了一个不好的榜样,影响孩子的健康成长,所以应该立即停止这种行为,而不是到别处去偷。第四步:列出关键词和词组
   power failure; selfish and stupid; care about; follows one’s advice; commit a crime; set an example for; instead of, etc.
   第五步:落笔成文
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