Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Letter to a Schoolmate. You should w

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问题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Letter to a Schoolmate. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
假设你是李明,你有一校友玩网络游戏成瘾,请给他写封信,劝告他戒掉这种游戏。
你的信应包括以下内容:
   1.你得知他玩网络游戏成瘾的渠道及你的感受;
   2.过分玩网络游戏的危害;
   3.你对他的建议或忠告。
                                A letter to a Schoolmate

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答案 A Letter to a Schoolmate Dear friend, Last time I came across you, I was surprised to find that your eyes were swollen and your face was pale. I thought you must have studied late into night. Later, one of your classmates told me the truth. You have been addicted to online gaming for a long time and you spent most of your spare time in the Internet caf. When I learned about it, I was shocked and extremely worried. As is known to us, it is very harmful to spend too much time playing games on the Internet. Firstly, it is an enormous waste of your precious time. As a student, we are supposed to concentrate our attention on our studies. Secondly, it does great physical harm to you if you stay up so often. You are likely to suffer from body imbalance as a result of exhaustion. Thirdly, your mental health will be seriously affected, too. If you completely immerse yourself in the unreal world and distance yourself from your classmates and friends, you will end up feeling lonely and isolated in the real world. I hope you will manage to control this problem and shift your attention to your lessons. Try to take regular exercise and communicate with others more often. In this way, you will live a more colorful and fruitful life. Looking forward to your reply. Yours Sincerely, Li Ming

解析 [审题]
   本文是一封建议信。劝告校友戒掉网络游戏,需要说明沉溺于网络游戏的危害,以及如何摆脱网络游戏。同时,作者需要注意说话的语气。
[写作思路]
   第一段:得知校友玩网络游戏成瘾,非常吃惊,同时感到非常痛心。   
   第二段:分析沉溺于网络游戏的种种危害——损害身心健康,浪费时间和精力。
   第三段:劝告校友及时从网络游戏中摆脱出来。
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