Write an essay based on the following table. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the table, and 2) give your commen

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问题     Write an essay based on the following table. In your writing, you should
    1) interpret the table, and
    2) give your comments.
    You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

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答案 From the table above, it can be seen that more than half students think parents are too strict, and more boys than girls have difficulties in communicating with parents. Besides, Over 80% of students won’t tell parents their secrets. Several reasons account for the phenomenon. The first one is that students cannot correctly treat parents’ strict requirements, which leaves misunderstanding among them. Besides, the two generations, having grown up at different times, have different likes and dislikes, thus the disagreement often arises between them. Last but not least, children become independent and seek for more private space after they grow up, so they are not willing to sit down face to face to communicate with their parents. Some measures should be taken to solve that problem. For one thing, children should respect their parents’ concept of education. For another, parents should care children’s inner world and praise them more often. Only in this way can the generation gap be narrowed.

解析     本题的表格为某校初中学生调查统计的“与父母沟通情况”部分数据。考生首先要描述表格,说明表格总体反映的情况,以及这三项调查内容上学生沟通情况的百分比。其次分析这种现象产生的原因,可以从三项调查内容上依次简要分析原因,如孩子不能正确对待父母的严格教育、两代之间有代沟、孩子成长后变得独立也有了更多的私人空间等方面进行阐述和说明。最后提出解决这一现象的措施,总结全文。
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