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Some students in the university enjoy privileges. For example, student athletes could pass the examinations with lower grades; m

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问题     Some students in the university enjoy privileges. For example, student athletes could pass the examinations with lower grades; members of the choir could survive the tests with low classroom attendance. Do you agree or disagree with the privileges enjoyed by the special group of students? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
                                Are the Privileged Students on Campus Acceptable?
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
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答案 Are the Privileged Students on Campus Acceptable? With the popularization of quality-oriented education, college students can develop their interests and hobbies more freely. Amateur athletes, singers and hosts become the second identities of many students who are entitled to special consideration in their studies. They can pass examinations with much lower scores. So some people say that it is unfair to allow privileged students on campus. However, I don’t agree with them. There are many reasons why I hold a different opinion, and I would explore only a few here. The main reason why I agree with some students enjoying special privileges is that it is more difficult for students to be versatile in a highly competitive world, and that exam scores no longer play a key role in evaluating the achievements of a college student. So schools shouldn’t ask students to be good at both their studies and extra-curricular activities. Furthermore, a person’s time and energy are limited. For example, when student athletes are exhausted by their daily exercises, there will be little energy left for them to study. So the special consideration for them will help these students concentrate on their specialties. All in all, what the so-called privileges students enjoy are not privileges at all, but a kind of support and encouragement. So the privileged students on campus are acceptable.
解析     本题属于对比选择型题目。要求考生对大学里一些学生享受特殊待遇的现象进行分析阐述。素质教育使大学生有了更多的兴趣和爱好，但同时参加各种活动也会影响到学生的学业，于是有的学校给予这些学生特殊照顾，在学习成绩方面降低了对他们的要求，这一做法引起了不小的争议。那么，大学里可不可以有这么一群“特权”学生?题目要求考生对此展开分析，提出自己的观点，言之有理即可。
    开头部分首先介绍了高校特长生在学业上享受特殊待遇这一现象。然后用“So some people say…”直接引出一些人的反对观点。最后用“However…”表明自己的态度。
    中间部分使用总分一总的结构展开论证。分别使用“The main reason…”和“Further more…”引出两点原因，并在分析时使用“For example…”加入实例进行论证。最后用“So…”进行总结。
    结尾部分使用“All in all…”总结全文，直接回答作文标题中提出的问题。
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