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  3. Read carefully the following excerpt on military training and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you s

Read carefully the following excerpt on military training and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you s

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问题     Read carefully the following excerpt on military training and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should:
    summarize the main message of the excerpt, and then
    comment on whether military training is necessary for students.
    You should support yourself with information from the excerpt.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
    Is Military Training Necessary for Freshmen?
    With the new school semester around the corner, millions of Chinese students are set to undergo a 2-week-long compulsory military training to kick off their new lives in high schools or colleges. Is military training beneficial for students and should it be compulsory?
    "It doesn’t make any sense to me. I mean, why we have to go through all these terrible experiences. Maybe it is a valuable memory to someone, but it never was to me. I went through three military trainings, when I began junior high school, high school and university, respectively, and each was the worst time I had during my stay in each school. We’re merely trained in marching and walking moves, and it never makes any sense to me how we’re gonna defend our country with this perfectly synchronized walking pace. Our trainers were soldiers and they were usually rude and very unfair when dealing with us. I was constantly being scolded and criticized during the training even when I was definitely obeying", said Sunny Li, a student of Communication University of China.
    However, some argues that there is nothing wrong with military training when you are in college, it is good for discipline and you learn how to work together as a team; also, when a country might get into a situation where its citizens are needed to defend the country they have some basic knowledge on how to do it.
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答案 Military Training Is Necessary for Freshmen Compulsory Military Training for millions of Chinese students will be on the way as the new school semester is approaching. But discussions have been sparked on whether military training is necessary for freshmen. Some students argue that the military experiences are terrible, useless and they have received unfair treatment from the trainers. However, other students favor its advantages such as the cultivation of self-discipline, teamwork spirit and basic military knowledge. From my perspective, I believe that compulsory military training is necessary for freshmen. To begin with, military training can help students better fit in their classes. Military training requires students to exceed the honor of their own and prioritize that of the collective. It is exactly under this circumstance that students will learn to unite to get any tasks placed before them done and win honor for their classes. Moreover, military training will be a good opportunity for these newcomers to get acquainted with their classmates and make friends. Besides, military training is beneficial to the cultivation of students, particularly their discipline, grittiness and bravery, which will all play an important role in their life later. Taking the reasons above into account, I think compulsory military training is necessary for freshmen.
解析     本题的主旨是讨论新生军训是否有必要。首先应当总结概括材料中内容，再给出自己的观点。文章结构可安排如下：
    第一段：简要概括材料内容，提出自己的看法——新生军训有必要。
    第二段：分两点铺陈论述自己的观点。第一，军训让新生能更好地融入他们的新集体；第二，再者，军训对学生自身素质的培养也是十分有利的。
    第三段：总结全文，重申观点——军训对新生来说是很有必要的。
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