For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled My View on School Uniform. You should write at least 1

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled My View on School Uniform. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.
1.人们对于“穿校服”褒贬不一
2.支持者和反对者各有说法
3.我的观点

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答案 My View on School Uniforms [1]When it comes to whether students should wear uniforms or not when attending school, there is no complete agreement among people.[2]Some people[3]take it for granted that schools should require students to wear schools uniforms,[4]while others maintain that schools should allow students to decide what to wear. Those people who hold the first opinion believe by requiring students to wear school uniforms, schools can foster students’ team-work spirit, and develop their collective sense of honor.[5]In addition, they point out school uniforms can remind students what their identities are and what they should do in school. However, others think differently.[6]In their opinions, school uniforms may[7]inhibit students’ individuality. Besides, they argue that school uniforms may hamper the development of their creativity. [8]Weighing up these two arguments, I incline to the former one. For one thing, school uniforms help to eliminate socio-economical barriers between students, for another, school uniforms will[9]play a role in keeping students under social supervision, such as keeping them away from the game center.[10]Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration, I may reasonably conclude that schools should adopt uniform policy and require students to wear school uniforms.

解析 [1]when it comes to为固定用法,意思是“当提到……”,用于引出讨论的话题。
[2]some和后半句多的others相呼应,构成“some...others…”表示“一些……,(而)另一些……”,用于阐述两种不同的意见,形成对比。
[3]take it for granted为固定用法,意思是“把……当成理所当然”,it指代之后提及的内容。
[4]while在范文中作转折连词,引出与前述相反的情况,并形成对比,类似的词还有but,yet,though,still,however,nevertheless等。
[5]in addition的意思是“另外”,和additionally意思一致,用于对前文阐述的补充说明。
[6]in one’s opinion的意思是“在某人看来”,用于引出个人的看法和意见,类似的结构还有in one’s view,as for sb.等。
[7]inhibit的意思是“阻止,约束”,类似含义的词还有prohibit,forbid,prevent,restrain,holdback,repress等。
[8]weigh up为动词短语,表示“斟酌,掂量”,与动词weigh意思不同,类似的词或词组还有consider,thinkover等。
[9]role在范文中表示“角色,作用”,play a role in的意思是“在……中发挥作用”。
[10]take into consideration是固定用法,表示“考虑到……,顾忌……”,类似的词组还有take into account等。
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