Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1. describe the drawing briefly,

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问题     Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
    1. describe the drawing briefly,
    2. explain its intended meaning, and then
    3. give your comments.
    You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

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答案 This cartoon humorously shows that a good many people, in laid-back positions, are surfing online in their dim cubicles , constituting a huge spider web. It is undeniable that the advent of the Internet revolutionizes the world. However, a-long with the great benefits offered by it, hidden crises are coming to the surface. The purpose of the cartoonist is to show us that the Internet can lengthen the emotion distance regardless of how close these netters sit to one another. Or, put another way, not only does the Internet offer a lot of convenience, but it brings about curses. For one thing, the long hours spent on the virtual world will weaken people’s social skills. Since it takes only a computer with Internet connections to work, study, and even entertain, people become indifferent and solitary. For another, spending excessive time and energy on the Internet, without doubt, leads to a variety of diseases, such as cervical spondylosis and shoulder periarthritis. Knowing what are the benefits of the Internet and making wise use of it create excellence. On the one hand, we can take advantage of the Internet to obtain knowledge and information conducive to our study and work. On the other hand, we should balance our time spent on online contact and activities in real life. Only in this way will we not be led by the nose, fall from grace and head for destruction.

解析     漫画以诙谐幽默的手法展示了网络给人类生活带来的变化。漫画中的人们挤在各自狭小的隔间里,沉迷在网络营造出的虚拟世界之中。他们在网上工作、打游戏、与素未谋面的人交流。看似比肩而坐的他们被冰冷的墙壁隔离开来,忽略了身旁的人与事,也忽略了外面精彩的世界。而图画的说明文字——网络的“近”与“远”——也进一步说明互联网在拉近全世界距离的同时,使人与人之间变得越发冷漠。网络的影响有利有弊,考生在写作时,可先肯定网络的好处,再论述其弊端。
    第一段:描述图画。进行细节描述的同时,可引入“蜘蛛网”这一概念,以此体现人们看似享受着网络的便利,实则是被困在了这一虚拟世界之中。
    第二段:揭示寓意。可先扬后抑,即先承认网络为人们带来的便利,再论述其造成的消极结果。
    第三段:总结评论。呼吁人们合理使用网络,并给出自己的建议。
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