1.越来越多的大学生一毕业就迈入婚姻殿堂 2.产生这种现象的原因 3.这种现象可能带来的影响

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问题    1.越来越多的大学生一毕业就迈入婚姻殿堂
   2.产生这种现象的原因
   3.这种现象可能带来的影响

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答案 Marriage upon Graduation ①As long as we open our eyes and look around, we will with no doubt find that a growing number of college graduates get married almost at the very moment of their graduation. ②Looking at the young couples, we can’t help wondering what is behind this trend. ③Firstly, there is no denying that the intensive employment competition is a major factor in the situation. Getting married means the couple can support each other in the harsh environment, in addition to the financial assistance from both families, ④ What’s more, some instant marriages due to web love or money worship make the marriage upon graduation a more romantic and reliable choice. ⑤On the other hand, it is only sensible for us to consider the effects of such hurried marriages. Chances are that the young couples are not mature enough to handle all the familial and social responsibilities bumping into their lives, which will undermine their happiness. ⑥All in all, I don’t think it’s a good idea to get married upon graduation.

解析 ①开门见山陈述“毕婚族”这一社会现实,生动形象的复合长句会得高印象分。a growing number of,at the very moment of为加分词组。
②从陈述现象转到思考原因:Looking at…we can’t help wondering…从现象转入评论; what is behind…属于高分短语。
③分析”毕婚”原因之一:残酷的就业竞争使双方相互扶持。也能得到双方家长资助。
④分析“毕婚”原因之二:毕婚族比网恋、拜金恋有感情基础。there is no denying that…is a major factor及make…a more…choice为加分搭配。
⑤转入剖析,干脆利落。“毕婚”也可能埋下了不能担当婚后责任的隐患。句型Chances are that…以及词汇bumping into,undermine都是高分之选。
⑥以All in all,I don’t think it’s a good idea to…澄明自己观点,结构完整。
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