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  3. Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should (1)interpret the chart, and (2)give your comments. You

Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should (1)interpret the chart, and (2)give your comments. You

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问题 Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should
(1)interpret the chart, and
(2)give your comments.
You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET 2.(15 points)
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答案 Students in this college don’t just study, they also work, as the chart indicates. In their first year, about 67% of them do part-time jobs and the percentage rises slightly in their second and third year of college education. But their last school year witnesses a drastic increase in their part-time employment, surging to 88. 24%. This pursuit of part-time jobs among college students is not surprising if we take the following factors into consideration. First and foremost, college education is no longer free and young people have to make some money to sustain their study in school and buy such things as computer and cell phone. Secondly, young people on college campus have more leisure time, allowing them to take some irregular jobs after school. More importantly, they feel a compelling need to accumulate some work experience during the four years so as to make their CV more appealing to their prospective employees. For this reason, seniors are more likely to work outside college. While I am not strongly opposed to this practice among college students, I am justified in advocating that young people should give topmost priority to their academic achievement. If they cannot strike a balance between study and money making, their will unavoidably have greater trouble in landing a job upon graduation. Therefore, college consultants need to guide young people properly and timely.
解析     这还是一个数据分析性作文。
    开头第一段描述所给的数据。描述之前，作者指出大学生不仅仅学习，他们也工作，以此引出几个关键的数据。
    第二段分析原因。其中的主题句非常值得读者借鉴。三个原因也都是非常明显的：经济上的需求、空闲时间相对多、积累工作经验。本段中的一些表达法需要读者认识，并能灵活运用。
    最后一段是作者发表的评论。作者虽然不反对，但坚持认为大学生的首要任务必须是学习。如果大学期间难以在学习和工作之间求得平衡，那么他们未来找工作更加困难。所以建议高校的学生顾问应该给予适当和及时的指导。
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